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“You have no right to say that to me, and then walk away. You
don’t know me!”
“I want to though, but I’m not willing to be pulled in and pushed
away.”
“You have no idea why I am the way I am.”
Jolie was soaked to the bone and shivering, but she held firm as
she stared David down.
“Then tell me so I know what I’m getting into.”
“I loved a man with every little part of myself—”
“Let me guess, he broke your—”
“He died!” The words exploded out her. Shock filled David’s
expression followed by what looked like guilt. “I pull and push because I have
no idea what I’m doing. I like you David, but if I think about letting you in
just a little, I see his face in my head.” She started sobbing.
“I—what do I say to that?” he said so quietly
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LOL "There's only so much you can take off..." I say the same thing all the time. Fall is my fav season, but I much prefer the winter over hot summer months. It's actually cooler here today, so I'm enjoying this non-heatwave. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, he was being kind of insensitive and I'm sure he didn't expect her response at all! Great hook!
ReplyDeleteGreat hook funny i dont like the heat eihter and Im a southern girl too sugar_n_spice63830@yahoo.com
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