Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Hump Day Hook

Welcome back! So, last week most everyone who commented asked what happened in the next paragraph in Courageous Dare. Well, Here you go. Although I really don't think you are going to like me very much. *evil laugh*

Excerpt:

Fire, screams, and orders shouted. The world spun as someone dragged Nash from the rubble.
“Sniper!”
Pop, pop, pop—blood, pain, and more orders shouted.
“Medic—I need a medic now!”
Nash didn’t know who shouted—couldn’t focus on anything other than the blazing pain in his left arm and shoulder. The screams, oh God, the screams burned into his mind.
“Baylee—take care of, Baylee.”
Gun shots and another explosion, planes and helicopters flying over head, pain and more pain, and then the world went black.



Seeeeee! I told you all it wasn't any better. I know, I'm evil. 
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11 comments:

  1. Geez! Yes, you are! Does he survive?????

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  2. Oh my, with this kind of intensity, we need to see if they get out okay. Well written scene.

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  3. Gah...such chaos and fear. Great hook!

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  4. Wow, what an action packed snippet!

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  5. The chaos of this moment completely catches me up within it.

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  6. So not fair!!! Ahhhhh! I can't stand it. Love it!

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  7. you're totally evil, Lacie! Love it!

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  8. Oh my, what fabulous action! I'm breathless from that hook :)

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  9. Compelling, I so want to know more.

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