Hello all, Happy Halloween! Today I'm sharing a little piece from So Beautifully Broken. I love sweet, romantic tid bits, but today I'm sharing something a little heavier. I like the drama and emotion, so here you go!
So Beautifully Broken
“I
want to help you,” Jack whispered into her hair as he breathed in her scent.
She smelled of apples, sweet candied apples. She fit into his arms perfectly,
like she was made for him to hold.
“You
can’t fix me, Jack. I don’t know how not to hurt.”
Lilly fisted Jack’s t-shirt in her small,
trembling hands at the base of his back. To him, her entire soul screamed for
help without her saying a single word. Everything about her radiated broken
innocence.
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A very powerful excerpt. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteSo good! Brilliant and beautiful x
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteAw...poor Lily! Great excerpt - very "real."
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful moment.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet moment!
ReplyDeleteI love the last sentence.
ReplyDeleteOooh! Intense, Lacie!
ReplyDeleteWow! Lots of emotion and great use of the senses here!
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