Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Hump Day Hook

Welcome back! I have another small piece from Courageous Dare for you all. You will probably hate me when you read it...*evil laugh*...so, read on people!!!

Excerpt:


Nash scanned the blown out buildings and the ravines in the rocks on either side of the road. Something caught his eye to his two o’clock. Before he could call any ones attention to it, a loud explosion rocked the ground.

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11 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectApril 10, 2013 at 7:52 AM

    That's too small! I need more! Wonderful hook! :)

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  2. Sarah CassApril 10, 2013 at 8:12 AM

    Ugh. Mean people with these hooks that cut off so abruptly!! (Yes, I know that's the point of the hook, but it's mean. lol). Wonderfully done! I am definitely hooked.

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  3. AnonymousApril 10, 2013 at 11:31 AM

    Omigosh! Is Nash hurt??! I hope not. Great drama.

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  4. Robyn SeitzApril 10, 2013 at 12:34 PM

    Ahhhhh! P-lease tell me you will post the next paragraph next week! Too good!

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    1. Lacie NationApril 10, 2013 at 12:38 PM

      LOL...I might, but I don't think you will like me much better.

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  5. AnonymousApril 10, 2013 at 12:47 PM

    Great hook, Lacie. Way to keep 'em hanging.

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  6. Sandra SookooApril 10, 2013 at 2:01 PM

    Nothing like an explosion as a cliff hanger :-)

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  7. UnknownApril 10, 2013 at 2:28 PM

    Ugh, you torture us! Great tension though, I love it.

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  8. Lucy FelthouseApril 11, 2013 at 4:49 AM

    Ooh, love that tension. Well done!

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  9. UnknownApril 12, 2013 at 6:31 PM

    I loved Nick in this book.

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  10. UnknownApril 14, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    short but intense. good hook! thanks for sharing. :)
    C.R.

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