Excerpt:
Jolie sat down after her long day of organizing. She tugged one of
the last boxes onto her lap and ran her thumb over the lid. Jolie swallowed
past the bitter grip of grief. She flipped the lid back and stared brokenly at
the contents. Baseball caps, old, faded t-shirts, photo’s that held perfect
moments that Jolie would never need a picture to remember. The box was
full-to-the-brim with Ethan, even his smell filtered from within. Great gasping
sobs left her as she slammed the box closed and shoved it under her bed. Her
heart pounded in her chest, and panic bubbled its way up until she cried out in
agony.
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Everything will be stuck in her memory to haunt her. Great hook
ReplyDeleteHope you feel better soon!
ReplyDeleteVery good hook:) Waaaant moooooore, lol:)
You could feel her sadness in the hook-very nice!
ReplyDeleteHer heartbreak feels so real, just as when we lose a loved one. Get better soon!
ReplyDeletePoor lady. Her grief is deep but I'm intrigued by her panc. What's the threat? Nice hook.
ReplyDeleteSo very sad. Makes me want to make sure she finds a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteHow utterly gut-wrenchingly painful. Wonderful hook. Feel better, lady.
ReplyDeleteAww, no. Great hook though!
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