The Weeping Willow Tree:
She
dropped the broom and rushed to the sink cradling her hand.
Danny
rushed to her side and took her hand in his as the water rinsed the blood away.
He pulled the cut apart to see how deep it was and she winced in pain. The cut
went from the middle of her palm down under her leather cuff, but wasn’t deep
enough to require stitches. Danny had unsnapped the leather cuff and eased it
off her wrist before she could stop him. When her flesh was exposed, her gut
twisted, her heart knocked against her ribcage as though it might pound right
out of her chest, and her breaths came out in rapid pants. Her worst fears had
just come true as his eyes zeroed in on the scars on her wrists.
For more wonderful posts Click here
Uh, oh...Secret about to come out? Great hook!
ReplyDeleteOooh, someone has a secret! Lovely and enticing hook! I love secrets, they always bring on the drama ;)
ReplyDeleteWow. I take it this is a turning point in the book. Nice job. :)
ReplyDeleteOoh why is she hurt? I just have to know more. Great hook
ReplyDeleteI'm with Naomi...guess I'll have to buy this book to find out what happened and what's gonna happen next!
ReplyDeleteA great hook. I loved the snippet and would love to learn more about them and what her secret is. Btw: for some reason, the blogger doesn't want to connect to wordpress profile, but it's Ciaran Dwynvil speaking here, not an anonymous guy :)
ReplyDeleteOoooo, what happens? Nice hook!
ReplyDeleteOh wow. You've managed to paint quite a bit in such a small space, without it being crammed. Well done, fantastic hook!
ReplyDeleteWhoa. I'm hooked. Cutter or suicide attempt? Added to TBR.
ReplyDelete