Excerpt Silent Tears:
Hearing Brax call Jonah son brought a smile to her
face. She couldn’t hold onto the image of his face as he held her in his arms.
When Jonah ran off to do as he asked, Brax face morphed into one of utter
horror. He held his hand up from where it held her at her lower back. When she
saw it, she gasped when she realized it was covered in her blood. The tear that
streaked down his cheek was the last thing she saw before everything went
black.
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An intriguing hook. It starts so innocently and turns into a horror scene so abruptly. Very well done. An attention grabber.
ReplyDeleteWow, what a hook. Good job, can't wait to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteOooh, way to turn a scene. Chilling. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteGreat hook, Lacie! The twist took me by surprise.
ReplyDeleteWOAH! Dont stop there! *Stamps foot*
ReplyDeleteOMG! What???? NOoooooo! Need more!
ReplyDeleteHoly crap!!! I can always count on your hooks to have an unexpected twist!
ReplyDeleteWow, I did not expect events to turn like that. Now I want to know what happened. This was a great way to get introduced to your writing. I'm happy to be joining everybody on the hop. :)
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Ohhh...that's a good one, Lacie. And I also love your book cover. :)
ReplyDeleteEek! What an awesome hook! I want more! :)
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