Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Hump Day Hook

Hello! So, so sorry I didn't participate last week. I was busy and sick at the same time. It was awful! Anyhooooo, here I am with a hook from Gravity Beach. Gravity Beach is book 2 in my Courage Series. We first met Jolie in Courageous Dare.

Excerpt:

Jolie sat down after her long day of organizing her new home. She tugged one of the last boxes onto her lap and ran her thumb over the lid. Her heart began an insistent pace and Jolie swallowed past the bitter grip of grief. She flipped the lid back and stared brokenly at the contents. Baseball caps, old, faded t-shirts, photo’s that held perfect still moments that Jolie would never need a picture to remember. The box was full-to-the-brim with Ethan, even his smell filtered from within. Great gasping sobs left her as she slammed the box closed and shoved it under her bed. Her heart pounded in her chest, and panic bubbled its way up until she cried out in agony.

I know, I know, I like the dramatic stuff! It's how I roll.
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10 comments:

  1. Oh my goodness, so sad :( It's like she's torturing herself just by opening the box. Nice hook! I want to read on in the hopes that she'll find happiness.

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  2. Oh, the heart wrenching pain. Very raw moment...wonderfully captured. Great hook!

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  3. Oh, how sad. I can feel the pain.

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  4. Aww, what an emotional snippet. Nice job!

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  5. Very heartfelt! Good piece. Thanks for sharing. :)
    C.R.

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  6. :-) Dramatic works. Very vivid scene.

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  7. The emotion is raw and heartfelt. Good selection!

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  8. Aww. Im heartbroken with her. Well done!

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  9. Oh my lord, poor Jolie :(

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