Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Hump Day Hook

Here's a little bit of, The Weeping Willow Tree. I hope you enjoy! Because Christmas is coming and I'm in the holiday spirit, one lucky person will win a free PDF copy of The Weeping Willow Tree. Happy Holidays!!!

The Weeping Willow Tree


Lydia ran at Willow just as she heard heavy footsteps coming down the alleyway. The impact from her small frame against Willow’s was tremendous. She got knocked to the ground and struggled with Lydia. She could hear shouting, but she couldn’t focus on what the words were. She felt a burning pain in her chest, just under her collarbone, but she kept fighting. She grabbed at Lydia’s wrists and tried to push her hands away, but Lydia pushed harder. Willow tried with all her might to get free, all to no avail. In the darkness it was hard to see what the hell was happening. Another pain in her side where her ribs ended, and suddenly she couldn’t breathe.
“Oh, God!” Lydia screamed as she stumbled away from Willow.
She vaguely registered something slick and red on Lydia’s hands, but Willow couldn’t clear the fog in her mind enough to figure out what it was. If she could only catch her breath—

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5 comments:

  1. Oh....intense!! Amazing hook...I want to read a lot more of this! ~fingers crossed~

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  2. Very nice fight scene. Great hook, leaves me wanting more. :)

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  3. Lacie, it makes me want to know what in the world has brought Lydia to such intense action. Well done!

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  4. I'm totally hooked on this. Can't wait for more

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