Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Hump Day Hook



Hello all, I've decided to get back in the swing of things. This week is action so I thought I'd share a little piece of my work in progress.

The sound of the Hollow’s moans was all Hannah cold hear other than horrified screams of the people of Haven. The three of them killed Hollow after Hollow. Thankfully, Hannah spotted her father and several other townspeople also making a dent in the horde. It was midday so everyone had been in the town square doing their part. That’s why the Hollows had honed in on the center of town. Suddenly, Hannah was overwhelmed with the same pain she’d felt when Angie and Joshua had been bitten. She crumpled over and screamed.
“Hannah!” Jaxon caught her before she hit the ground. “Hannah what’s wrong?”

“Bitten—people are bitten.” Hannah gasped for breath, but none would come. “The sickness is spreading.”

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3 comments:

  1. OH Awesome!!!! She feels it???? What a clever twist!

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  2. Oh heck!

    Great description!

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  3. This does entice me to want to know more about Hannah's affliction or abilities and what is going on.

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